16th Dec 2015, 6:25 AM in Ch.1 The Beginning
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phoenixjklin 16th Dec 2015, 6:25 AM edit delete
Sorry it took so long. I've had a lot of stuff to think about lately. Finally another page done though! :'D
I also changed to font a bit, hoping it looks better.


ranger_brianna_new 17th Dec 2015, 12:41 AM edit delete reply
Well, there are always advantages and disadvantages to traveling in a group. Being alone increases vulnerability, being in a group increases chances of something going horribly wrong.
The Letter M 31st Dec 2015, 5:34 PM edit delete reply
The Letter M
I like the idea that it's the character's personal perspective and it's written in the hand written font.
...(RockB) 25th Jun 2019, 1:29 PM edit delete reply
I have to admit that I liked the previous font a bit better, but let's see how well this one does when it's very small.

Good flow up to here, by the way :)

Edit: After having seen the next page, I'd say that the previous font was better readable.
phoenixjklin 25th Jun 2019, 1:47 PM edit delete reply
Oh, that's interesting! I think my thought process for changing it, other than the trouble caused by certain symbols and letters, was I didn't like the line-thickness changing in the middle of a letter, and that some letters were bigger than others.
Thank you!

Ah, the first font?
I was still unsure about which font size to use, and I think I'll use the same size no matter where in the future, to keep some consistency.

Thank you for the feedback by the way! Very much appreciated!
...(RockB) 25th Jun 2019, 3:22 PM edit delete reply
This fond is not so bad but I kinda don't like the "up-shifted" "w". It would be my 3rd favorite one.